写作作业一

Posted 2022-12-01 we1less

People in their daily lives would frequently do the jobs that need creativity, such as the job you have never done before. Under this circumstance, do you prefer to work alone or work with others?

in their daily        介词短语作后置定语

woul        will 的过去式

that need creativity        定语从句，修饰 jobs，需要创造力的工作

人们在日常生活中，经常从事需要创造力的工作，例如你之前从来没有做过的工作，在这种情形下，你更喜独自工作还是与与其他人一起工作呢？

修改问题：

1. 第三人称单数问题：

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动名词短语属于单数概念

        Learning new words is very useful to me.   

2. it comes to(动词短语) + 名词性短语

        When it comes to physics, he is a complete stranger.

3. 矛盾缺句子

        [ Whether / What / How ] xxx has triggered heated discussion.

        How we completed works has triggered heated discussion.

4. 矛盾 与 立场需要对立，比如题目中 ABC，矛盾可以是AroB，立场为C

5. [ because / due to / considering / in terms of ] A and B

is conducive to improving ourselves because it helps to borden one’s horizons and improve communication skills.

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Finishing works safely exerts impact on everyone’s life and thus receives huge attention from the public. When it comes to completing works, people’s opinions vary from person to person based on their personal values. [3] How we completed works has triggered heated discussion. Some people are of the opinion that working alone [4] is better for us to complete works, while I hold the firm belief that working with others is conducive to improving ourselves because it helps to borden one’s horizons and improve communication skills.

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A/D All university students should be asked to take at least one course about the culture of a country other than their own.

be asked to        被要求

other than        除...以外

knowing different culture exerts impact on everyone’s life and thus receives huge attention from the public. When it comes to taking one course for graduate to  learn different culture, people’s opinions vary from person to person based on their personal values. Whether graduates take one course to acquaint foreign culture has triggered heated discussion. Some people are of the opinion that graduates needn't take one course to know the culture of other countrys is better for graduate's development, while I hold the firm belief that takeing one couese for learn foreign culture is conducive to their development because it helps to borden horizons and improve historical knowledge.

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If you have limited time to visit a city, which of the following is the most effective way to learn about the city.

        ——Touring historic sites

        ——Going shopping in shopping centres

        ——Spending time in restaurants or cafes.

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1. how to do

Culture learning exerts impact on everyone’s life and thus receives huge attention from the public. When it comes to visiting a strange city efficiently, people’s opinions vary from person to person based on their personal values. [1] How to spend the least time to learn about a city has triggered heated discussion. Some people are of the opinion that going shopping or tasting local food in restaurants is better way to know a city, while I hold the firm belief that touring historic sites is conducive to learning the culture of a city because it helps to borden horizons and improve historical knowledge.

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If you are going to graduate from the university and have to choose the final course, which professor will you choose? The one you used to sign up for courses or the one you have never learned from before?

Education lays the bedrock of the fundamental value of a person and poses far-reaching influences on a person’s future development. When it comes to choosing different professor people’s opinions vary from person to person based on their personal values. How to select professor for the final course has triggered heated discussion. Some people are of the opinion that selecting the familiar professor is better for students to complete education, while I hold the firm belief that selecting the unfamiliar professor is conducive to improving ourselves because it helps to borden one’s horizons and improve communication skills.

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Children aged 12-16 are taught different subjects by different teachers, while younger children (aged less than 12 years) are taught by only one teacher all day long. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger children (aged less than 12 years) would get benefits if they are also taught different subjects by different teachers every day.

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1. 观点要大：学生教育，医疗、环境

2. 围绕主题，学生教育

3. 矛盾从题目中改，不能抄题

[1] Children education exerts impact on everyone’s life and thus receives huge attention from the public. When it comes to choosing different study pattern for [2] younger children, people’s opinions vary from person to person based on their personal values. [3] Whether different subjects should be taught by different teachers for younger children has triggered heated discussion. Some people are of the opinion that studying with the same teacher is better for children to learn subjects, while I hold the firm belief that they learning different subjects with different teachers is conducive to a child's growth because it helps to borden their horizons and improve their communication skills.